Tuesday 26 May 2020
I made this slideshow about spotify music. It contains my favourite Genre Rap/Hip-Hop and much more. I originally did this for my class rooms music playlist but ended up being for me instead. Disclaimer-I don't own the rights for the music and if you wanna listen search for clean versions
3 comments:
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteNice job here Noah. You have had a good start back at school! Your slides are visually appealing and interesting for the viewer/reader. It is important to think about what someone would think if they were looking at it the first time, so well done. Good punctuation and editing of your writing too.
ReplyDeleteNext steps:
- I would like you to stem away from the simple short sentences. I am not asking for full paragraphs for each answer but I do want to see some more detail added in.
- You have a good vocabulary so I would like you to make sure you are only writing formally. There is a few sentences that do make sense, but only when we are talking to one another. This writing is for everyone to see, so we need to make sure everyone understands it. Some viewers might not undertsand the saying "While popping off with a good mood".
Other than that, this is a great start to our writing this term! Well done.
Good job Noah this a bagger I really like both of these songs it cool and I like the flow
ReplyDelete